Babysitter Blues by James Miles

Another Damsel In Distess

The story begins like an episode of Scream, with a creepy phone call, and it leaves the Babysitter's stomach in knots. The end goes a little further than I anticipated, and that was good. The narrative doesn't stray from the beaten path, though, and the editing is really bad. Usually, I am extremely forgiving when it comes to indie authors, but when it gets to the point where the story is difficult to read, I feel compelled to mention it.